Flash Fiction: Odd Man Out

Hiram’s buddies thought he was an oddball for playing a sport where you wore pajamas and rolled on the ground.

That all changed after a bully began pushing one of Hiram’s friends, and he tied the punk in knots using Jiu-Jitsu.

Word Count: 42

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Bill Chance says:

May 25, 2020 at 12:01 am

Nice – pretty much a whole life in 42 words.

Thanks for sharing.

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- Dave Madden says:
  
  May 25, 2020 at 12:33 am
  
  Thanks for checking it out👊
  
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Deb Whittam says:

May 25, 2020 at 6:09 am

That was great, loved the ending 😃

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- Dave Madden says:
  
  May 25, 2020 at 1:54 pm
  
  Thank you. I enjoy the weekly prompt!
  
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42 Words #18 – Twenty Four says:

May 31, 2020 at 3:02 am

[…] Dave Madden from MMA Storytime […]

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