Legs Like a Newborn Fawn

A punch cracks the jaw:

Walking like a newborn fawn,

Lights begin to fade.

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revivedwriter says:

May 10, 2020 at 10:15 pm

Ouch!

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- Dave Madden says:
  
  May 10, 2020 at 10:29 pm
  
  😂
  
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msjadeli says:

May 10, 2020 at 11:11 pm

Good visualization!

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- Dave Madden says:
  
  May 11, 2020 at 6:22 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Frank J. Tassone says:

May 11, 2020 at 3:36 pm

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (5/11/2020): Dave Madden’s latest #senryu for my current #Haikai Challenge!

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#Haikai Challenge #139 (5/17/20): fragrant breeze (kunpuu) #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #haiga #renga – Frank J. Tassone says:

May 17, 2020 at 10:05 pm

[…] Dave Madden2. Revived Writer3. […]

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