A punch cracks the jaw:
Walking like a newborn fawn,
Lights begin to fade.

Prompted from Frank J. Tassone’s Haikai Challenge at: https://frankjtassone.com/2020/05/09/haikai-challenge-138-5-9-20-fawn-kanoko-haiku-senryu-haibun-tanka-haiga-renga/.
A punch cracks the jaw:
Walking like a newborn fawn,
Lights begin to fade.
Prompted from Frank J. Tassone’s Haikai Challenge at: https://frankjtassone.com/2020/05/09/haikai-challenge-138-5-9-20-fawn-kanoko-haiku-senryu-haibun-tanka-haiga-renga/.
Ouch!
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Good visualization!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (5/11/2020): Dave Madden’s latest #senryu for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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