His skills aren’t there yet.
Growing on his own timeline;
Late cherry blossom.
Prompted from Frank J. Tassone’s Haikai Challenge at: https://frankjtassone.com/2020/04/26/haikai-challenge-136-4-26-20-late-cherry-blossoms-osozakura-haiku-senryu-haibun-tanka-haiga-renga/
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#Haiku Happenings #2: Dave Madden’s latest #senryu for my current #haikai challenge!
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